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Thoughts? This article is great and has a wealth of potential. --[[User:Ohmyn0|Ohmyn0]] 01:55, February 14, 2011 (UTC) |
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Latest revision as of 15:53, 15 June 2012
Formatting
I'm not thrilled with the uncapitalized "he" at the beginning of every sentence. Also, every sentence needs to end with a period. I know it will be monotonous, but it will make it look a lot better. I think all the sentences need to be written such as:
- He has a wife and kids, whom he refers to as his "janitor wife" and "janitor kids". ("My Mentor")
- He is 37 years old. ("My Mentor")
- He saw Turk go through the back door of the hospital (and when J.D. uses the door, he locks him out). ("My Best Friend's Mistake")
- J.D. stole his ammonia and window cleaner. ("My Fifteen Minutes")
Also, a categorization might be helpful. Such as:
- Janitor's childhood
- Janitor's family
- About Janitor's life
- About J.D.'s life
- About the hospital
Thoughts? This article is great and has a wealth of potential. --Ohmyn0 01:55, February 14, 2011 (UTC)
The above seems to have been dealt with. (Flowtron 15:53, June 15, 2012 (UTC))
About the "Misc. Lies" His eyes never close. (My ABC's) .. for one thing, it's proven false (and he admits it!) instantly, since he blinks. Also it's inside a fantasy of J.D.'s - so it's not really a lie told by the janitor. (Flowtron 15:52, June 15, 2012 (UTC))